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Post by geodain on Apr 25, 2011 15:58:28 GMT -6
chapter one Geodain was a 13 year old who ran away from because he barely got food only a slice of bread every three days.2 years later now a days he earns money by doing jobs.Geodain surveyed the crowd in a crowded town in the desert looking for his contact.He spotted him being followed by a disguised orc quickly geodain strung his bow and shot the clock tower.It made a ringing noise that temporarily distracted the crowd and the orc letting his contact escape the orc.
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Post by geodain on Apr 25, 2011 16:00:36 GMT -6
sorry about it being so short but i need to get somebody to be my contact thats a member and please tell me if i'm off to a good start
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Post by gilthas on Apr 30, 2011 12:35:55 GMT -6
This is a good start for a first(?) story. Keep it up!
Pro tip: read novels by good action and horror authors and you can get a good idea at what makes readers sit in awe, tension, suspense, fear, or stupidity. lulz
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Post by geodain on May 1, 2011 21:14:40 GMT -6
i do already read stories like that
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