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Post by geodain on May 9, 2011 14:09:59 GMT -6
chapter 3 3 years later the army is still fighting over the city of Meboe.Geo a master of light is the main reason the army is still trying to take over Meboe.Geo stands staring out of the 500 foot tower ready for battle jumps out of the tower and lands on the top of an enemies head and smoothly draws his sword and beheads the enemy and starts fighting five people at once he kills them all.All around him the war is raging neither side gaining the upper hand.He jumps over the wall to enemy territory he moves stealthy to avoid detection by enemy he climbs the enemy tower and at the top he sees his rival Zane Zane says have you come here to kill me Geo replies yes Zane says I won't let you.then they start dueling the slice and dice then Zane's arm goes flying through the air Geo looks at it and Zane takes the opportunity to smash Geo's sword and sending it flying trough the air Zane holds his sword and inch in front of the throat Zane says you lose.
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Post by geodain on May 9, 2011 14:10:50 GMT -6
please comment i think this is the best one yet
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Post by Octavius on May 31, 2011 7:37:59 GMT -6
Aside from a few minor punctuation errors, this is pretty good
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